Nuanced NarrativesRatna Raman ALONE TOGETHER: SELECTED STORIES OF MANNU BHANDARI, RAJEE SETH AND ARCHANA VARMA Translated by Ruth Vanita Women Unlimited, Delhi, 2013, pp. 248, Rs. 350.00 VOLUME XXXIX NUMBER 5 May 2015 I have always admired Ruth Vanita’s work on
account of its articulate lucidity. Reviewing her translation of short stories
by Mannu Bhandari, Rajee Seth and Archana Varma from Hindi to English promised
to be an exciting possibility.
However, I found
Vanita’s introduction unbearably heavy, making a lot of claims for what are
extremely slight narratives. Despite raising many issues in her introduction,
Vanita continues to put the cart before the horse. While I do not dispute her argument
that in popular patriarchal perception women’s honour is made to reside
entirely in their ‘genitalia’, the claims made about women’s issues being
raised through women’s fiction in India are not entirely substantiated by the
translated short stories that form part of this particular anthology.
The stories are
middling, oftentimes rather quaint, and although I reread them, distrusting my
initial response, they still did not blow off the top of my head, which as
nineteenth century woman poet Emily Dickinson points out is the impact invariably
produced by great writing.
‘Yehi Sach Hai’ by
Mannu Bhandari grabbed eyeballs as the delightful Bollywood film Rajnigandha,
starring Amol Palekar and Vidya Sinha. It captured the evanescence and fleeting
emotions of romanticized love and both Palekar and Sinha were at their inspired
best in this light-hearted love story that ended well. This is possibly the
first time that I have preferred a movie over a written translated source.
The
narratives that have been strung together give us some extremely ordinary
people, which is not a problem by itself, The situations in which these
ordinary people find themselves are again not really memorable. Many of the
situations are maudlin, as in the story of a man stealing from his employer to
pay for medicines for his sick mother. After his mother’s death he wishes to
cease but now his wife asks him to continue stealing in order to provide a
handsome dowry for their daughter. This strikes the man as an unreasonable
demand from his wife. Meanwhile the daughter’s in laws are loving and
undemanding and do not want any dowry in cash or kind. Women can be
exploitative and succumb to expediencies as mothers and wives, but these are
not new discoveries and one is not particularly inspired or motivated by any of
the characters in this particular story.
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