![]() FOOTPRINTS OF A YOUNG DANCERSandhya Rao FOOTPRINTS OF A YOUNG DANCER By Aburva Govindarajan Year 2016, pp. 63, Rs. 180.00 VOLUME XL NUMBER 11 November 2016 Dear Aburva,
I appreciate your reasons for writing this book. As a young person
who reflects on a lot of things, you want to connect with others
like yourself and like your parents so that they may understand
each other.
In this instance, you have focused on your passion for dance,
bharatanatyam in particular, how you were briefly distracted from it
owing mainly to peer pressure, and how you returned to it and performed
the arangetram, your first solo public performance of
bharatanatyam.
Along the way you have shared your impressions of Oman, where you live; you have provided information
about Chidambaram, the town
your father hails from and also important
for the temple dedicated to
Nataraja and Govindaraja, and in
Hindu thinking believed to be the
venue of Shiva’s cosmic dance. You have
written about how you suddenly
gained weight despite practising vigorously
for the arangetram, and you
have explored various facets of dance
even as you have introspected on your
own personality and character.
This is laudable, and material that
has the makings of a pretty solid book.
I understand this and realize that you felt the way to share all that
you had imbibed was by writing about it, and getting it published.
However, what I find baffling is how you and, more importantly,
the editors at the publishing house, allowed this book to be printed
the way it has been: teeming with errors and gaps and plain bad writing.
It’s not your fault, you did what you could. It was up to the
editors to bring your work up to scratch. They bombed. Then I checked
out Educreation Publishing online and found it’s a self-publishing
house that works on the principle of you pay, we print. It makes no
reference to editors. Clearly, they don’t exist in their scheme of things.
And that’s the problem with this book. It’s only a very early draft.
The warts show from the very first sentence: ‘I was witnessing
one of those rarest events, watching my parents displaying their differences
through a verbal spat.’ It’s a pretty dramatic opening sentiment.
Unfortunately, it’s also a very clumsy opening sentence. Then
follows an unending parade of mistakes too embarrassing to enumerate
(‘It might be funny for elders hear a young girl of my age
feeling stressed out…’; ‘He is convinced that learning vocal music
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